Reincarnation |: Tangent Lines

I love this book ^^ I feel thrilled while reading. I am waiting for more. ?

first of all he doesn't have an advantage because his memories only come when he gets hit in the head, second then there is no need for him to introduce firearms, although there are hopes of cannons or grenades and the like, third, first we it shows a brave and strategic young general, but then it shows us a weak general, incompetent and I don't understand the last thing, if his soldiers have armor, experience, he can finish him off but he decides to be a hostage, pathetic.Although I know what you want to get with the problems you facealthough it is good but it does not fit much.

I'm writing this with so much anger in my heart, In chapter 56 after giving his disciple a thousand years worth of his cultivation he got back 100 thousand years worth of cultivation and you'd think with a hundred thousand years worth of cultivation the MC will become super strong but NO the MC was only able to progress by one minor realm LOL ONE FREAKINF minor realm not even a major realm after getting thousands of years worth of cultivation and his useless excuse is that his mental state hasn't gotten to that level yet BRO you just received a HUNDRED thousand years worth of cultivation so what useless mental state are we talking about again, AUTHOR you're useless this should be the last thing you ever write

This is a masterpiece that should get chosen and continued as fast as possible so they wouldn't make us disappointed as what happened with 'the demon's menu' and 'calamity of tomorrow'

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This is a new staple original I'll be adding to Webnovel. Hopefully, everyone likes it. And I don't delete reviews; Webnovel does if they have certain words in them. Don't come at me thinking I'm the one doing it. Please leave reviews about what you think.

The flow of the story needs improvement.